Topical Tourny Round 1: Vex vs. Enlightened

[MicrophoneFiend]

16 Lines, first to 5 votes, 3-0 KO rule IS in effect, verses due by Saturday @ midnight.

Your Topic is: Revenge.

[Vex]

check

and good topic

[enlightend]

topic is ok it kinda is like my last one tho

anyways check

[enlightend]

i need till sunday im busy vex an mic fiend let me know

[Vex]

thats fine.. i wasen't gon drop till tomorrow anyways lol

[enlightend]

aight mayn good i gottas aloty a drinking ta do tonight lmao

[enlightend]

vex wanna extend this till noon tomorrow ive been hella busy this weekend

[Vex]

Yeah, I don't mind.. imma have mine posted tonight though.

[MicrophoneFiend]

Post when yall can just dont take forever and a day cuz then I got people buggin me about "come on whens the next round gonna start"

[enlightend]

ANOTHER BAD NIGHT.......

in a room alone with no lights on hate fills me thinkin bout how my whole lifes gone/
looking with anger at the memory of this stranger who came in too my home that night armed/
i try and close my eyes and invision my children but that night still clutters my vision/
years later an still this nightmare has me imprisoned knowing this nigga is still living/
arrested but there was no conviction so now its my lifes mission too find this bitch and/
express my sickest intentions.......
...........he took my kids and wife so now he owes me 3 lives and i want my redemption/
i get the planning find his address in the phone book..perfect..its next to the city landin/
that night i fall asleep clutchin a vodka bottle a picture of my son and a loaded hand gun/

THE NEXT DAY........

my memory was foggy but i realize my thought weren't just induced by the heavy drinking/
an since revenge is what i was seeking I'm a do it while hes sleeping is all i was thinking/
i enter his apartment at about midnight first door i open and this guy is already in sight/
i blast his leg then 1 shot to the face kills his wife i want him to suffer so i use my knife/
focused on ending his life and unaware of my surroundings.........
...........i here someone then turn and shoot it was a child only about 3/
i then see the carnage that surrounds me i realize i have become what i hate wit no boundary/

MY GOD WHAT HAVE I DONE.....

i felt my sanity crumble around me an know this hate is a sickness that cant be lifted/
so wit no 2nd thoughts, an actions so quick i put the gun to my temple and i crumbled with it/

[Vex]

Sometimes I Wonder.. Would Life Be Different With Him Here?
My Fathers Eyes.. My Fathers Tears.. With My Father Here
But That Isn't Happenin.. Because The Act Of Selfish People
Now Here Sit Back.. As I Tell You What I Dealt Those Weasels
About 3 Weeks Ago.. I Found Out It Was Them Behind His Death
Got Their Address.. Got Their Pictures.. I Knew What Was Best
So I Strapped Up.. Anger In My Eyes Knowin What I Shall Do
Keep Repeating "They Deserve My Anger, May Heaven Doubt You"
It Was The Mans Daughters Birthday.. She Was Turnin Age Of 7
Celebrating As I Burst Him.. Happy B-Day Heres A Mac 11
Spit Upon His Slain Seed.. His Soul Partner Burst In Tears
He Wasen't Home She Said.. Only Close Family Replied From Slurred Fears
Asked To Speak To His Dad.. Cause I Needed A Few Answers
He Stood Up.. Elderly And Bald.. From Relapse Of A Renewed Cancer
I Told Him.. I Had Come To Murder Him And His Son "I Repent"
I Killed Him That Day... Then Myself Later.. Lifes Own Revenge

[enlightend]

aight lets get some votes

[datn***aREDD]

i'ma go wit E on this one...E shit had great imagery, nice multis, and a great flow...Vex was bout even wit E but his shit had better imagery and was a lil' easier to follow...


vote : Enlightened

[Vex]

yeah man..

you spit it hard.. i wrote mine up in like 10 minutes when I remembered when I came home.. good battle.

[enlightend]

1-0 keep voting


thanx vex your was good too

[enlightend]

bumpin to the front page for some votes!!!!!!!!

[MicrophoneFiend]

Good drops from both but i could definately picture E's scence better. Vex your shit was dope but E came serious wit his shit and it was a damn good story.

Vote=Enlightened

[enlightend]

ok 2-0 uppin for votes

[datn***aREDD]

yall niggas stop bein' fuckin' lazy and vote so we can start the second round...damn, and niggas wonder why this site is fallin' off....

[datn***aREDD]

i guess niggas don't see the topical tourny goin' on...yall niggas need to vote so we can get this shit over wit...

[Kilo]

My Vote Goes To E Vex Was pretty Good But i could pictures E Better Vote=En

[enlightend]

aight done........... 3-0 good battle vex............. aight set up round 2

[M.O.B5]

My Vote Is= En

[MicrophoneFiend]

Iight 3-0 E... next round starts now.